snakes girl

(an excerpt from one of my student's speaking assignment... grading can be fun sometimes hehe)

I'll share with you about the talk between olivia and I. It was on March 11. We talked about the snakes that almost every girl loves. The topic is snakes, such as different kinds of snakes we like, we want to buy them. I think it is exciting that we can eat so many snakes, but we don't put on our weight.

here's what my correction to her paper looked like :)